Wednesday, March 4, 2009

What I want to be when i grow up..........

When I am older I want to be a vet. I want to go to one of the best vet colleges in the country and graduate having learned every technique that they could teach me. I want to be living in southern California, Florida Alabama or maybe Washington. I want to have a nice beach house that is close to my private practice. In my house I want to have an indoor pool with a water slide. Around the pool there will be sand instead of cement. There will also be a hot tub beside the pool. I also want to be well enough off to be able to afford a nice sports car: a Porsche or Mercedes ect.... I want my house to be very open and bright with lots of windows. It will be very modern with all of the newest tech.

5 comments:

  1. Your writing looks swell to me its very detailed. Nice dream hope it all comes true for you.

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  2. nice dream.... but you should probably work on your punctuation i think.

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  3. You left out a comma in between Florida and Alabama. Other than that it's a good dream.

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  4. You can put in still more detail and we know that when your older you want to do this because of the title

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  5. Way to dream big! I hope you get where you want to go and achieve all of these goals. Your writing was a little bit "stop and go". It doesn't really flow and it flips to ideas that go apply to each other, but they don't flow together.

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